Two Smothered Children by Marion Albina Bigelow

I enjoy bad poetry. In fact, there is a book called, "Very Bad Poetry." It is written by Kathryn and Ross Petras. This is one of their selected poems and I missed the joke.

In the introduction of the book it states most of the poem are in it because they provoke laughter. This poem is uncomfortable and morose. Maybe that is why it is humorous. Finding fault in the subject matter may cause shameful laughter.

This poem addresses neglect and lack of safety protocols regarding fire hazards. The imagery is of two children burned to death in their own home. Provoking anger and concern children trapped with no method of escape.

Not only does it address ineffective means of escaping burning buildings; it pleads for people place guilt on parents or adults because they should have already addressed the problem. It is well stated in the line, "No fond parent closed their eyes."

Even today there are many problems with safety codes. Inspectors are now saying stairwells should be wider. Children still end up suffocated in their rooms, because of the lack of training in fire drills. During the time this was written a group of women plunged to their deaths, because they were locked in a building. The only way out was to jump out of the window, which didn't have a fire escape.

People knew fires were dangerous and did little to assess the problem. The word "parents" is not so much referring to a child's parent as much as it is referring to previous generations and government. The children are living in the world as it is defined. Therefore, she is placing responsibility with the government, as opposed to society. The fire represents an impending doom. If we are not prepared it causes the death of society.

Theirs was not the peaceful death-bed,
Where affection's silent tears,

This poem screams in outrage. It is a strong political message. The imagery is deep and moving. It is manipulative by portraying children as victims; however, overall it is excellent. Beyond simply wanting safer building codes it is also a metaphor stating this generation should be proactive in improving life of the next generation.

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Very Bad Poetry by Kathryn and Ross Petras